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Post by blue1983 on Jan 10, 2014 21:11:30 GMT
Tear drops are falling down my face I can't stop them from coming down so fast My mind is racing with so many emotions and thought which won't go away My body is so tired from all the emotional strain that is going on All I want to do is sleep or even just run way from all the hurt and the pain. my mind is still racing, but now telling me what should be doing to myself like burning,cutting myself or even banging my head against a wall, or even pulling my hair out, by one strand at a time. all of this to get rid of my pain and guilt of stuff that is going on..... But it never stops......... CAUSE THE PAIN NEVER TRULY GOES AWAY
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Post by Admin on Jan 10, 2014 21:25:27 GMT
Aw that is full of emotion and a very powerful poem indeed. I really like it it really portrays a sense of loss and isolation as well as deep sadness too. Thanks for sharing Blue1983 x
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amme
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Post by amme on Jan 12, 2014 12:56:28 GMT
i love this poem, it portrays so much emotion and i can really relate to it. I used to suffer from depression and have a history of self-harm and this poem really reminds me of those moments when things just got on top of me.
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Post by Admin on Jan 12, 2014 13:02:19 GMT
I agree amme - I think some of the best poems are those which you can relate to in some way... I think that perhaps quite a few of the members here might relate to this poem and it's emotion...((hugs))
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Post by annierose on Jan 13, 2014 15:14:06 GMT
That's a great poem!! Do you write much poetry?
xx
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Post by blue1983 on Jan 13, 2014 17:26:47 GMT
Hiya, thank u for your lovely comments,its good to know that I'm not alone with way I feel bout stuff and that the emotion came though it. Yea I do write a lot of poems, I have a bookful of poems that I have written. Xx
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Post by Admin on Jan 13, 2014 17:44:30 GMT
That's really fantastic that you have a whole book of poems that you have written perhaps you'd like to share some more with us at some point? And you're certainly not alone honey... We're all here for you, and we do care Hugs.xx
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