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Post by Admin on Jan 12, 2014 15:04:39 GMT
FOR ALL ETERNITY
Sometimes I feel so tiny, as in little; young. Some things take me back to that desolate time. Like candy, and cotton and egg with soldiers, And other things but those which make my cry.
Rape and abuse, mistrust; being used. These are things I've been tied to. Never will I forget the things I used to do, Just to try and escape from a nightmare.
Today I am twenty-five and it dawns upon me; However old I grow, I still feel tiny, as in little; young. Ill never escape the claws I was introduced to. They have become the crutch I must lean on.
Sombre I feel as I rely on these claws, Whom never allow me to just be. They have taken my name; caused me extreme pain Yet I must live beside them for all eternity.
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Post by annierose on Jan 13, 2014 15:14:48 GMT
That's really good but sad too. I like It a lot though x
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Post by blue1983 on Jan 13, 2014 17:32:49 GMT
Hiya I really like your poem it has so much emotion in and the hurt that u have felt though out ur years. I think there will be so many ppl that can relate to this in so many different ways, and this is what ppl need is to relize that they r not on there own. Thanks for sharing xx
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Post by Admin on Jan 13, 2014 17:47:32 GMT
You're most welcome I'm really glad you liked my poem and that you could sense the emotion in it. I hope too that many will be able to relate to it and it will be great if members can find some comfort in other members poems...xx
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